Hello first of all please make sure you give your posts names! It would be nice if you could add text to the above image since I have no idea what its about! Which makes it impossible to discuss!
That being said I find your initial concept found in the first post has potential; however your translation lacks precision and is far too subjective. Please take a few steps back and study your light images. Try developing a drawing technique to record those images precisely.
Hello first of all please make sure you give your posts names! It would be nice if you could add text to the above image since I have no idea what its about! Which makes it impossible to discuss!
That being said I find your initial concept found in the first post has potential; however your translation lacks precision and is far too subjective. Please take a few steps back and study your light images. Try developing a drawing technique to record those images precisely.